Brokenkit [+] AirClan

[Kjitsu.]

Name: Brokenkit
Moons: Six.
Gender: She-Cat
Clan: AirClan
Rank: Kits [New-Borns]
Short-Description:

white cat with tabby patches and bluegreen eyes.

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Description:

eyes

her right eye: Soft, delicate colors fill her eyes with life. At the bottom of her right eye, the very bottom, it is the color of dark lichen. A little further up, blue and green combine to create a greener color. Around the pupil it gets bluer, to the point of a dark green. Between the pupil and the edge of the eye it turns into a pretty cyan color. And though her eyes are pretty, Brokenkit will never get to see them, no matter how hard she tries. Unfortunately, other than the fact that few waters are still enough for her to see, she is blind.

her left eye: Colors transform. Where there was once a blue eye, now there is a greener one. Amber lies thinly at the bottom of her eye, much different from the brown-blue-green theme in her right eye. It's a simple spot, hard to notice most of the time. The amber curls into brownish green. It then quickly evolves to green. The two eyes are usually looking down, or up, but not usually at whomever she may be talking to. After all, she can't see, so how can she tell where their eyes are?

sinuses

her nose: It's a brownish pink invasion! Her nose is the average pink, yes, but it's got a lot of brown in it too. It is more sensitive than the average nose, but that's simply because she is blind. It can track things better than her eyes could, easily, even if she could see.

her mouth: Brokenkit has a nice mouth, filled with sharp, sparkly teeth. They are greeted by a pink tongue each morning, one that keeps them clean.

her ears: Graybrown tabby markings completely cover both of them. The insides are a light pink, and the fur in front is white.

pelt

length: shorthair.

fur: Brokenkit's fur is white, with tabby markings. Her tail is completely black. On her front left paw, there is a black spot, with stripes smeared above and below it. She has another on the paw just behind that one; and on her back, it makes a wide stripe that goes up to her head. It then goes to her face; a stripe blazes down her nose, and the tabby markings take over nearly half of her face.

body

height: eleven inches

length: twenty one inches

weight: four pounds, two ounces

Personality:

Brokenkit is a very friendly cat. She likes to talk, but also to listen. She holds the secret of her blindness, one she would never release. Though she likes herbs and is very sweet, she prefers to just be helpful. And although she keeps secrets, she is still trusting and honest. Brokenkit is understanding, and listens when it's needed. Strong-willed, she can be annoying at times. Hopeful faith always lies with her. A thinker, she is quiet and loving.

Brokenkit loves thunderstorms and the rain that comes with. Traveling is fun to her; so is exercising. She likes to listen. Nature and fire also lie in the list of things she likes. Her favorite seasons are leafbare, leaf-fall, and newleaf. However, Brokenkit hates greenleaf. Twolegs, dogs, and their loud sounds and surprises can get really annoying. When she talks, she doesn't like lies in response. Also, being mocked ticks her off- she can do perfectly fine on her own, thank you. Ambitious cats are disliked; so is hatred and pain.

History:

kithood

Brokenkit was born blind. Her brother, Deadkit, had been born dead. And her sister Bluekit was missing two legs, plus her mouth couldn't open. Brokenkit was the only one left, living in the nursery with her depressed mother, Cricketheart, and her father, Kestrelfang. Brokenkit snuck after them one day when they left camp, argung. She was only a moon and a half, her eyes barely open but unseeing anyway. Two warriors nearly caught her right before she left camp; they laughed and thought she was playing a game. And so she left, following her parents. Brokenkit discovered them, attacking each other on the towering cliff. Her mother tumbled down, but only after catching onto Kestrelfang's leg and bringing him with her. Brokenkit sprinted back to camp and straight into the leader's den, wailing that her parents had fallen and died. But, as her nose wasn't too strong yet, the blind kitten accidentally rammed into a wall. The medicine cat gave her some tests, then announced to the Clan that Brokenkit was blind.

Brokenkit insisted otherwise. Her argument was that everyone was blind, but soon she learned otherwise. It was a sad and hard fall. She slept in misery in the nursery for the rest of the moon. Eventually she came out, but she was blind. What use for her would the Clan have? None... Then, as soon as she hit four moons, a kitten, it's eyes still closed, was found. Brokenkit cared for him like a son, chewing up fresh-kill and feeding him that. And, as soon as his eyes opened, she was repaid by greencough stealing his soul. Devastated, she hung around his body until dragged away to the nursery den. Brokenkit stayed, sad and mournful. There she still sleeps, but she's perked up a lot.

Role Playing Example:

copied from my post at Ashes in Your Path

i'll do whatever it takes;;

Hawkpaw's eyes turned to slits. Her leader must have forgotten about the blind cat in the Clan, because he was sprinting away at full speed. Her pelt prickled, and she muttered, "Fine. Leave me here to die, the blind cat never pulls through." The freshness of the Clan's scents was slowly fading as she was left alone in the camp, listening to everyone else leave. She had never gotten the chance to go to Fourtrees, so the terrain would be too unfamiliar for her to trek alone. Carefully planning each footstep, she followed Lightningstar's scent, though it was faint from so many other cats walking upon it. It didn't appear anyone had stayed for her. Having been paying attention to her Clan's scents and only her Clan's scents, she nearly rammed into a tree.

to turn this around;;

Hawkpaw unsheathed her claws, frustrated. Lightningstar wasn't a very good leader. She turned and found her way by scent back to her camp, laying on the ground to die. The familiar camp scents were slowly disappearing like her Clan, and like in that fable she'd heard about as a kit, with ShadowClan driving out WindClan and two brave ThunderClan warriors brought them back. But, that had been when whoever told her had been a kit, being told themselves, by someone who had been a kit for the story too. The apprentice raised her head to the sky, crying out in desperation. Lightningstar could leave her, the seemingly helpless, stupid cat who didn't deserve life.

i know what's at stake;;

and i know i've let you down;;

Ravenclaw's fur bristled. Why should the Clans have to move? A soft pelt brushed up beside her's. She hissed, pushing the cat away with one paw. For a split second the mismatched eyes looked familiar, but she tore the thought away and glared at the RiverClanner. "Why are you here?" She snarled, unsheathing her claws. "The rest of stupid RiverClan hasn't arrived. Wait for your Clan, mousebrain. And keep away from me." Ravenclaw turned back to her herbs, plucking some new leaves from a tree above. She wrapped the leaves around different assortments of herbs, glancing around to find cats to help her carry the packages. The RiverClan cat was still behind her; she could sense it.

and if you give me a chance;;

Ravenclaw whirled around. "Didn't you hear what I told you? Get lost, cat!" Both of the white cat's mismatched eyes stayed focused on Raven's white paw. Her mouth was slightly open, but she stood and backed away. Ravenclaw rolled her eyes then got back to work. What was that cat's problem?

believe that i can change;;

i'll keep us together;;

Brokenheart kept her gaze focused on the white paw. She remembered many moons ago, that faceless black kitten that she had known as her sister, with white halfway up one leg. But, she daren't speak. She knew her sisters were dead. Turning, ashamed, Broken padded away. That cat was not her sister, and never would be. Jaystar appeared from the trees, Brackenwhisker panting beside him. "Go back to your Clan," she heard him say, "And let them know RiverClan has come." Jaystar nodded to the warrior as he obeyed, then glanced invitingly at Brokenheart.

whatever it takes;;

The femme quickly averted her gaze. Jaystar had been so kind to her lately, but dense to just about everyone else but Mistybreeze. Why? She was just a friend to him... right? He couldn't actually be.... in love with her! But, why wouldn't she stare him down? Was she admitting to loving him too? Brokenheart flicked her gaze at him for a second, sighting confusion and something else. "I feel sick." She lied. "I think I just saw my sister." Looking at Jaystar as if for approval, he rolled his eyes and sighed, "Such a nice cat gone to waste because of her sisters."

she said if we're gonna make this work;;

That was it. Broken's head flew up and she bristed. "What did you just say?" she bared her teeth, ready to attack her own leader. "What did you just say?!" she repeated, claws unsheathed, voice demanding. Jaystar gave her a satisfied smirk, holding up a paw and pressing it against her chest. Broken lowered her head and bit it, causing him to wince and whip it back to his body. "You keep your nose out of my business, Jaystar. My whole life disappeared when I was a kit. Maybe you should live it yourself to understand."

you gotta let me inside even though it hurts;;

don't have the broken parts that i need to see;;

Jaystar scowled as Brokenheart stalked off. He gestured with his tail for the rest of his Clan to follow after, moving behind them to Lightningstar. "Welcome, Lightningstar. I'm sorry about your loss. I went through the same thing less than a moon ago, but I was never appointed deputy." He glanced sheepishly at his paws. "How is your Clan?"

she said like it or not, it's the way it's gotta be;;

Part of him longed to go back to Brokenheart, but his paw still hurt from that bite. He briskly licked it twice, looking unsurely at the sky. For a split second it seemed as if they were lifting him off his paws and putting him next to the female he loved, but then it faded and the realization that he loved Brokenheart vanished.

you gotta love yourself if you can ever love me;;

i'll do whatever it takes;;

Jaystar hesitated, his mind focused on the white she-cat in the crowd. His ears were deaf to Lightningstar's words, and it took him a moment to realize the other tom had spoken. "What?" he murmured distractedly. "Oh. Yes, I will, if you help support me as leader." Jaystar sighed. "Few cats in my Clan believe me." His eyes were on Brokenheart again as he watched her meander around, glaring at some black medicine cat that was sorting herbs. "Hold on, Lightningstar." Jay wasn't sure the leader could hear him, as he had spoken so quietly. He bounded away, but at the look that Broken gave him he slowed. She turned away from him and stalked off, tail waving in the air. "Great. Even one of my best warriors hates me." Jaystar muttered, then he returned to his spot by Lightningstar.

to turn this around;;

Brokenheart turned back around as Jaystar went to the other leaders. She sighed. The denseheaded cat had almost his whole Clan against him. The least she could do was be kind to him, even though he probably felt too rejected at this point. She rolled her eyes. That tom was too immature to be a leader, and he still needed to appoint a deputy. Broken tensed as her eyes flitted back to the cat with the white paw, who was now facing the sky with a haunted expression on her face, mouthing some words.

i know what's at stake;;

and i know i've let you down;;

Ravenclaw felt a prickling on her pelt as she continued with the herbs. Her eyes longed to stare up at the sky, but she didn't want to stop sorting. Finally she turned, feeling eyes staring at her. A single star seemed to be brighter than the sun at that moment, and she fixed her eyes on it. A huge gust of wind from StarClan carried a message: Blood shall become one, fates shall combine. Hatred shall fall, battle shall strike. Realization will criticize, and darkness will fall. Ravenclaw felt like a tree had rammed her in the face. She staggered backward and nearly fell over, nosed up by that same white RiverClan cat. For another split second she thought she recognized her, then it left.

and if you give me a chance;;

"Go away." Ravenclaw muttered, shouldering away the slightly larger cat. Her face betrayed how troubled she was, causing the cat with mismatched eyes to stay. "What's your name?" she asked Ravenclaw. "Why should I tell you? I mean, it's not like we're family." Ravenclaw felt like she was reassuring herself more than she was the RiverClanner. "I'm Brokenheart. My si--" Ravenclaw had dug her claws into the top of Brokenheart's paw when she almost said that dreadful word, 'sisters'. Ravenclaw turned back to her herbs. "I don't care, now go away. And before you ask, I'm perfectly fine. A medicine cat always recieves prophecies before the whole forest moves." Ravenclaw was sure to load her words with sarcasm. "Of course I'm not fine! Are you happy? Now leave me alone!" Ravenclaw slashed at Brokenheart's face, claws impacting on skin. The white cat backed away, mixed emotions in her eyes, then fled. "Good riddance." Ravenclaw muttered under her breath, returning to her herbs.

and give me a break;;

i'll keep us together;;

Shadowcrystal slowly stepped into Fourtrees, freezing at the sight of so many cats. Just then she remembered why Lightningstar had brought them there; they were moving. Oh, this was sooo not good. Her father had never left the forest. As soon as they stepped somewhere that he hadn't known of, her vision would blur and she would be as much use as a blind cat. A blind cat. In that instant, she remembered that ThunderClan actually had a blind apprentice: Hawkpaw. Shadowcrystal scanned the clearing, looking for the brown cat. Oh no. She wasn't there! The warrior rolled her eyes and cursed under her breath, then turned and fled back toward camp. Her vision fuzzed slightly, but she shook it away and told herself, It's bad enough to have to go fetch a blind cat, but how will we get back if I'm blind, too?

i know you;;

Shadowcrystal burst into camp, having cleared her vision again. "Hawkpaw, come on. I'm sorry Lightningstar forgot about you, but I'll lead you back." The only time she wasn't a jerk was when she was talking to the cat that she had a little in common with: both had eye issues. She placed her tail on Hawkpaw's shoulder, then led her slowly to Fourtrees. Suprisingly, Hawkpaw didn't resist or complain to being helped. She must be too annoyed at Lightningstar to really care. After a few minutes they were back in the clearing, and both sat midway between the Great Rock and the trees.

deserve much better;;

but remember the time i told you the way that i felt;;

Shattereddiamond padded after WindClan to Fourtrees. She had no idea why the Clan was here, but she'd followed her leader faithfully and ended up at this place. Cats were milling around, waiting for one of the leaders to speak. Glancing around, the warrior spotted Ravenclaw working at her herbs and being pestered by some white cat, then slashing her nose and watching her flee. Shattereddiamond headed over to the medicine cat, instantly being welcomed and shown which herbs went where. That was easy. She thought, glancing sideways back at the white cat with a little red on her muzzle. Mismatched eyes. She pondered, then went back to work.

that i'd be lost without you;;

never find myself;;

Silverbreeze, on ShadowClan patrol, meandered into the clearing with Butterflywings at her side. Both stared in astonishment at the gathered cats, and Butterflywings sat in suprise. "Should we tell ShadowClan?" she asked. Silverbreeze didn't answer. Three of the Clans were here, and faint ThunderClan scent had passed the border. "I think they're telling ShadowClan themselves." She murmured, eyes wide. Why were the Clans here?

let's hold onto each other, above everything else;;

start over, start over;;

Jaystar gulped, looking around nervously. "Before we begin speaking, I need to, er, appoint a deputy." He felt like fire was burning inside his belly. "I don't think ShadowClan would care if they weren't here for it..." The tom took a step forward, so he was at the highest point on the rock. "Er, cats of RiverClan, please gather here beneath the.. Great Rock for a Clan meeting." His pelt tingled as he called a Clan meeting when he technically should call the Gathering meeting, but he dismissed the thought. "The time has come for me to appoint a deputy."

i'll do whatever it takes;;

Other:

I only did her as a kit because I want her to have a ceremony. =D

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[™SMOULDR.!]

If I'm correct, the personality should be written out.
Overall, the bio is marvelous.

I'm so used to telling people they can't join as a kit, too... lol.

[Kjitsu.]

So, do you want me to change it?

And I edited it. <3

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You can't join as a kit on another site I'm an admin on - she's fine here. xD

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