Post by ™SMOULDR.! on Aug 13, 2007 23:23:39 GMT -5
Name: Magmapaw
Moons: 7 moons
Gender: She-Cat
Clan: AirClan
Rank: Apprentice [Trainies]
Short-Description:
Moons: 7 moons
Gender: She-Cat
Clan: AirClan
Rank: Apprentice [Trainies]
Short-Description:
Slim flame-colored she-cat; pale sea-blue eyes.Picture:
x;Description:
.framePersonality:
Magmapaw is slim. She isn't underweight, malnourished, nothing. But she is... thin. You can see her ribs. Although, she was built for speed. Her legs are muscled with layer upon layer of steel power. Head is shaped perfectly, with triangular ears, and her tail snakes out, nice and long.
.colours
Magmapaw has... colors of the oddness. Her pelt, orange, red, yellow- the colors like a burning fire, is mainly orange on the back and paws without a single obscuration. Legs are dappled with golden flecks, and face has bengal red markings. Her eyes though. If you look at the color of a sandbar in the ocean, imagine that. As a soft colour, and oh so much more bright and sinister. They've been like that for countless years, and no one can figure out why.
.other
Again... she is SLIM. She has a visable ribcage, but she's built for speed and her legs are layered with muscle i'm sure you'd rather not expirience. Her ears are rounded very nicely, hollow to pick up even the faintest noises. Usually she has a mean look to him, very serious and silent, but at times she can look gentle too.
.shortHistory:
Usually commanding, but never mean, she takes charge in situations when it calls for. Sje tries to be fair in judgement, and hardly ever misjudges one's character. She hopes dearly her Clan is fond of her, and loves her like a sister. She usually goes about to tend to minor chores without being told, like cleaning the elder's bedding and such.
.in dept
Magmapaw... just dwell on the name for a moment, and see what comes to mind. Firey, mean, sarcastic, non-hesitant to fight, and most of all, a blood-red humongous rouge-band leader with insane eyes. Now think again. A slim orange/yellow/red she-cat with long legs, and violently bright sea-blue eyes. Now what comes to mind? For some, a kind and gentle soul. For others, a firey and witty apprentice. All of you were right. She's big for an apprentice with her body type; she's kind and gentle, yet ferocious, dedicated and willing, yet slow and biding. Inside, her soul is burning, but around it there's a cooling mist. Way inside, she could be a merciless killer waiting to shread you, but really, only if pushed too far. She's caring and understanding, willing to listen to every side and ready to make any sort of desicion.
.kithoodRole Playing Example:
She was born thin. Many worried for her, and others didn't give a care less. Her mother was frightened to death, and always cared for her in fear of her just... dying. Forcefed whenever she was full, nothing seemed to work. She stayed horrifyingly thin.
.pre-apprenticeship
All was figured well with her when she looked well enough to be apprenticed. About now she had the ruthlessly strong legs, and gorgeous pale-green eyes. She was a heartbreaker, some said as she started to gain weight, and body mass. The Clan was happy. One kit a season was bad to be premature, so they though. They were glad she survived.
.apprenticeship
She was made an apprentice. Magmapaw. All was praised and warriors and apprentices, kits and queens, elders and StarClanners alike when her generation's ceremony came. As she stepped into the sunlight that day for the first time, no one celebrated. Her eyes... were so foreign. So new and different. She was worried for by all except the heirarchs. They had purpose for her. Dubbing her the given name, things went on to be easful and her "abnormality" was accepted. And then she grew. Taller than she was, at just 8 moons she stood a 14-moon old warrior, short by an inch. And she thinned. Not by sickness but by genetics; her father was skinny, but both parents were of average height. No one knew why she stood so tall. Another inch and she stopped growing, but she never got any fuller in the stomach. She looked sick, due to her weight, but it was accepted.
x;Other:
First time I ever copy/pasted Para's bio, other than on TWF.
Can we say Magmaclaw? =]
