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Post by Zeddicus Zu'l Zorander on Aug 7, 2008 23:44:07 GMT -5
[The old plot never went through. >>]
IN CONSTRUCTION;; means the story WILL change. most likely.
Everyone knows that Poison is a mutant. It's obvious through her purple fur. When Poison first came to LightClan, she only had her family to be there for he, before she began to learn the clan ways and gain respect from her fellow clan mates. Inkstar offered to give her a warrior name, and she refused. Shortly following that, she began noticing Zealheart, a white warrior with golden eyes. The only problem she had a with him was how closed he was to others. She hoped she would be able to help him with that, when or if she ever told him her feelings.Her feelings grew day by day, until she finally worked up the courage to tell him how she felt. He rejected her.
Crushed, Poison closed herself to everyone around her. Zealheart didn't like her because she was not like the other she-cats! She had purple fur, not normal fur! She was angry with him over this. She was in a horrible mood day in and day out. She went to Thumblethoughts daily for poppy seeds to calm her, but they seemed to hardly dull the blade of her anger, but it did shorten her outbursts. The only cat that dared approach her and risk getting blown up at, was Inkstar. He wanted her to be happy, return to the she-cat he knew before. He hated seeing Poison like this, so angry. He also didn't want to take advantage of the she-cat's current state, for he had recently began feeling for her. Slowly but surely, Poison began to open up and become less of an angry cat. With this, she realizes that she was also starting to feel for Inkstar. Scared of him also rejecting her, Poison reverts back to her previous state, but not as severe as she also didn't want to hurt him. Inkstar notices instantly.
He works harder at her shell, and it diminishes faster then before. They become even closer to each other, their feelings for the other growing by the day. Then he remembers his last mate, and how his kits had to go to LakeClan. He is hesitant to pursue Poison as a new love, and kinda backs off a bit. Poison notices the withdrawal, but doesn't know why. She goes to Thumblethoughts, who, ever since she got to this clan has been there and is like the big brother she never had. She could tell him anything, and when she asks why Inkstar is withdrawing from her lately, he's confused whether he should tell her why he was doing this.
-uhm, ideas here that have yet to be made-
Poison feels ill one morning, and goes to Tumblethoughts for advice. Tumblethoughts looks her over, and realized that his little sister is pregnant. When he tells her this, he is still pondering whether to tell her of Inkstar's previous kits. Just as Poison is about to leave, this motherly glow around her, he almost doesn't want to ruin her happiness but calls her name out anyways. She turns back to him, and he confesses. He tell sher of Inkstars kits that live in LakeClan, and that their mother had died given birth to them. Poison's good spirit falls away.
[This is it so far.]
Future Mate; Inkstar :: Whitey. Like Her Big Brother Tumblethoughts :: Lunar. Crush/rejected by; Zealheart :: Zealheart.
Possible Positions? Jealous she-cat; Is basically in love with Inkstar, and resents Poison for falling in love with him. Tries as much as she can to split them up. Inkstar's previous kits; Both male, about thirty moons of age.
Anybody can post, but no applying for positions! [We still have no idea how to incorporate more positions, as we will be still talking this over, we're open to suggestions, though. :) I'm trying to put Shadow's death in here somewhere, like after Zealy hurt Poison, it just basically screwed her over.]
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Post by _LUNAR ♥] on Aug 9, 2008 21:59:49 GMT -5
This seems very, very interesting. But I don't have a cat in Lightclan... yet. If Tumbledthoughts is accepted as medicine cat, he may have something to do with this, but I would have to wait and see. No promises yet.
So, Inkstar's kits moved to Lakeclan, huh? Maybe Poison can meet them or something? And they slowly accept her and tell their father or something. Ugh, bad brain. -hits head-
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Post by && White Shadow on Aug 9, 2008 22:02:37 GMT -5
the kits wouldn't know about their lightclan hertige probably...but they could come into play...just means we'd need them to be made... :] they aren't actually around, but they can be UFA i was gonna pull them together sometime to get them actually here...i say this like he's at another site. xP he's not...
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Post by Zeddicus Zu'l Zorander on Aug 9, 2008 22:11:26 GMT -5
That opens up more positions. About Poison and his kids, maybe Poison out one day, and I do believe LakeClan borders LightClan, that she comes upon a smell that is much like Inkstar's, but isn't, and Inkstar never told her he had children. Or something. I'm throwing ideas out here, and some I'm still developing. xD [/blockquote]
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Post by && White Shadow on Aug 9, 2008 22:17:13 GMT -5
I thiink we should definately bring Inkstar's kits into play...somehow
Two brothers either black or marble or a mix of them, and around...oh how old is Inky....uhm 56....let's say they're 30 moons...but they're up to whoever wants them to make them.
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Post by Zeddicus Zu'l Zorander on Aug 9, 2008 22:22:03 GMT -5
Heh. That doesn't make Poison much older than them. xD And I agree about bringing them into play. [/blockquote]
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Post by _LUNAR ♥] on Aug 9, 2008 22:40:07 GMT -5
So now that Tumblethoughts is accepted, he can be in the plot. Is there any particular role you want him to be in? I was thinking he can keep an eye on Poison, because of her states (medicine cat job). Maybe give her a few poppy seeds here and there. And be the first one to notice the love between Inkstar and Poison. It's your choice, though.
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Post by Zeddicus Zu'l Zorander on Aug 9, 2008 22:45:53 GMT -5
Good idea, good idea!
Maybe Tumbledthoughts could be a good friend of hers. Like when he starts to notice the growing affection between the two, hmm.. lost my train of thought. [/blockquote]
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Post by && White Shadow on Aug 9, 2008 22:49:37 GMT -5
oooooooooo....ooooo just had a small idea....maybe tumbledthoughts was an apprentice...the time would fit....when his mentor took the kits to lakeclan so he would know about the kits...but he's been sworn not to tell anyone too....so maybe poison comes to him with confusion and questions....and things keep going and.....i'm done....ya'll take it over this train here
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Post by _LUNAR ♥] on Aug 9, 2008 22:50:21 GMT -5
Hmmm... Maybe he's been quite interested in Poison ever since she joined the clan? Not love, but friendship. And he always seems to look out for her. He's a good friend with both of them, I'd say. Because leader and medicine cat are often quite close.
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Post by Zeddicus Zu'l Zorander on Aug 9, 2008 22:55:45 GMT -5
You guys caught my runaway train! XD
Both very good ideas, and both will be used, most likely, if we get the kits in. I hope so indeed. Tumbledthoughts is like the big brother she never had, friendship? Poison would most likely go to Tumbledthoguhts about the confusion over the Inkstar-similar scent, and if it ever comes to her being pregnant, maybe she's pregnant with his kits when she finds out he had other kits in a clan, and their mother died whild giving birth, and she's afraid of telling Inkstar she's pregnant for awaking those fears? [/blockquote]
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Post by && White Shadow on Aug 9, 2008 22:57:22 GMT -5
Oooo good....it would so freak him out....yes, I like that continuation.
-holds everyone to spatula-point until both kits are taken-
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Post by _LUNAR ♥] on Aug 9, 2008 22:57:25 GMT -5
Oooh. Good idea. Tumblethoughts would LOVE that.
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Post by Zeddicus Zu'l Zorander on Aug 9, 2008 23:00:15 GMT -5
Ooh yes, indeed! -incorporating the ideas now-
-stares at Whitey's avatar- It all makes sense now... [/blockquote]
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Post by && White Shadow on Aug 9, 2008 23:02:15 GMT -5
Rofl. -grins and holds spatula loosely behind back- What? Me and a spatula, pshh, it's harmless. -coughmaybecough-
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